I posted a page of one of my old comics not too long ago and I decided I should show the whole thing and review it.
Also I only drew three pages of this comic. I drew other comics as well, but I eventually ripped them up out of shame and disgust.
Anyway let's get onto the cringe.
Boy you can tell I put a LOT of effort on this. Such lovely detail! I especially love the coloring. So this was like way back in 2011 when The Adventures of Fabio and Patty was still a thing. On the left side is Fabio, Terry, and Patty. They're the heroes. On the right is their evil counterparts, Badmouse, Tarry, and Punker... God those names are sooooo bad. Badmouse? Tarry? Punker? Who the hell would name their children that??
Anyway the name of this comic book is "Being in the Future". SO C R E A T I V E . Also if you look at the bottom right hand corner, you'll notice a 7 there. Yup. This is the seventh installment of my old comic series. I had like 20 planned, thank god I stopped.
Also can we please talk about how disgusting Fabio's ears look? Like b o i -
Okay first of all I just love how I crammed the title of the first chapter all the way at the top left corner. "The Future and Present Rodents".
Wait, what the fuck? These... aren't the future versions of the characters. They're the evil counterparts! Why the hell did I title this "Being in the Future?" What?? I can't even right now-
Anyway I love the whole circle hands thing, really great. It makes me feel better now because my art has been through a lot of changes. Even though looking back at the old comics are cringey, it's still fun. A part of me regrets ripping up my old comics, because I'd love to reread them.
"You sassin' me, punk?" IM WEAK OMG
Also those two little mice at the bottom are Punker and... Milly? I think that was her name. She was the evil counterpart of Molly. Gross.
Oh okay so Fabio, who by the way is the strongest hero in the whole comic series, is just going to get his bitch ass slapped by a six year old? Pathetic.
Also DAMN HIS ARM IS MAD SHORT TF
Why does his mouth extend all the way to the back of his head?? Damn Punker what that mouth do
You can tell for some some reason it's absolutely illegal for the speech bubble to intersect the drawing because they do not touch at all. It ends up creating an ugly ass speech bubble.
Later? What do you mean later? What ever happened to Fabio, Punker, and Milly? You're not going to explain it? Of course not.
Also don't scold at Tarry for his goofiness, you're the one wearing an eyepatch even though your fuccing eyes are C O N N E C T E D .
And is he wearing a cape... with his hoodie?? BOI IF YOU DONT-
The hell is up with Badmouse's hand in the first panel? It looks like a foot.
Anyway what is Badmouse and Tarry going through? Is there a frenemy relationship going on or do they genuinely hate each other? Why does Badmouse consider himself a friend so much? What has he been doing to Tarry? Maybe he's responsible for his grumpy attitude?
AND HOW THE HELL DID THOSE THREE JUST ARRIVE AT THE SCENE JUST LIKE THAT??? What, did Fabio try to run away and Punker and Milly followed him? Why is he on the floor like he's about to give Tarry the succ? How did Badmouse and Tarry not notice those three behind them while they were having their unnecessary conversation? And why is Punker and Milly so surprised? Fabio and Badmouse don't look that similar, there's no way you can mistake one for another, seriously.
Yeah, sure. Just stare at each awkwardly, why don't you?
God their arms are SO SHORT AND ITS MAKING ME ANGRY
Also I totally didn't get the word "faker" from Sanic the Hoghedge
Oh my god Fabio WHAT THAT MOUTH DO BABY
It's kind of weird how I added fingers on his circle hands. Like did they just pop out of nowhere?
Also, it's very awkward to respond to that question with "me too". You couldn't have said anything else?
Okay for Fabio's dialogue, what I meant was "You look nothing like me!", not "You look like nothing compared to me!" Also if Badmouse looks NOTHING like you, then why did Punker and Milly think you were him? Hmm? EXPLAIN FABIO EXPLAIN.
Again with the awkward response. Couldn't you have said "Feeling's mutual" or something like that?
Ughhhhh, can I just say that Fabio is acting VERY out of character? He's usually a very angry and depressed person because of his totally not edgy past. Why is he acting like a pussy ass bitch? Why isn't he spitting some insults? That's something he would do. Instead of "You look nothing like me!", he would just straight up be like "Bitch who the fuck are you??"
...This review is over.